Can someone rate and help me better my yugioh deck?

I don't really think yu need a scapegoat in that deck and dragon rage is really not needed either, dragon gun fire, united we stand. Yu need more traps yur monster aren't really going to go through either like evil hero and a lot more monsters theres too much to go through kinda need to edit it to a better 40 card deck I see where yur ideas are going but in a tournament they would've already "otk" yu