Rate, Comment, or help my dragunity deck?

you really should make your deck as close to 40 as you feel you can. Get rid of darkspear. 1-2 Effect Veilers are really good along with 2 Spirit Reapers. Debris Dragon can help get lvl 7 dragon synchros out and since you're probably not going to use Dragunity Knight Trident (lvl 7 synchro) you'll have more of a reason to run Spirit Reapers (...and maybe other lvl 7 synchros like Black Rose Dragon). Leyvaten isn't much of a team player, but seeing you can't get Phalanx atm i suggest getting 1 Light and Darkness Dragon for the Leyvaten Rider loop. Brandistock doesn't need to be at 2. get 3 Terraformings, 1-2 Pot of Avarices, and 1-2 more Cards of Consonance. United We Stand is not that great in my opinion. Etaqua i would kick out along with Trap Hole and Nightmare Wheel. 2 Dark Bribes or 2 Seven Tools of the Bandit should replace them well along with another Bottomless Trap Holes or get 2 Dimensional Prisons. At least get Gae Bulg since he's the cheapest Dragunity Knight and can pump himself if you need to.